M.O.A.B
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ok, so i've just uploaded a new story, it's an alternate story to Baldur's Gate and is based around the Bhall spawn know as Kresselack AKA "The Black Wolf". Leave me some feedback here, ya? Also any aspiring illustrators / Artists wanna do some sketches for me they would be welcome, here's the list:
1. Kresselack in his armour
2. Kresselack's two swords Chaos and Doomhaber
3. and finally "The Beast"
have fun
Oh before i forget the story is:
here
Posted: 2004-06-12 10:04
Razortech Xeno ...
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Good start, it already sounds like a very very good story.
Posted: 2004-06-12 21:05
M.O.A.B
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awesome im glad the first feedback was a good.....no great one, thanks Razortech!
Posted: 2004-06-12 21:16
hardkoreUSMC
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I really can't be a critic as I'm a pretty "green" writter myself, BUT from what I can see, it's gonna be a fun-filled gore packed hack&slash fic.
Posted: 2004-06-12 22:58
M.O.A.B
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yeah......you get the idea Kore
Posted: 2004-06-13 05:07
Blackdawn_70631
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Nice indeed M.O.A.B.! I'm impressed. You left the reader wanting more. Though it was a little hard to read, go to your edit story/chapter page and try backspacing the sentences, they're spaced awkwardly.
Posted: 2004-06-13 10:49
M.O.A.B
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yeah i did a straight convo from Microsoft word to note pad thas why it looked like that. I'll sort it out now
Posted: 2004-06-13 12:00
M.O.A.B
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well i just tried doing it but it looks fine on the edit page.....so i didn't change anything but it's still like it on the actual story page.....have i done something wrong
Posted: 2004-06-13 15:39
Blackdawn_70631
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hmm . . . I really don't know what to tell you except to just upload over the original document but before you do make sure everything is spaced correctly on the file.
Posted: 2004-06-13 18:07
M.O.A.B
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Thanks Blackdawn_70631
! It's done! It looks right now!
Posted: 2004-06-14 14:01
M.O.A.B
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ok well it was right the first time i looked but behold it has transmorphed back to the *$!*ing way it was
Posted: 2004-06-14 14:10
Blackdawn_70631
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Well, have you saved it through a txt file?
Don't feel that bad about it, the story makes up for it's nice plot, action filled scenes and nice wording.
Posted: 2004-06-14 14:24
M.O.A.B
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yeah it's saved as a .txt file from wordpad on windows
Posted: 2004-06-14 14:36
Blackdawn_70631
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I'm gonna try something real quick.
Posted: 2004-06-14 14:40
Blackdawn_70631
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Well I've just tried saving through wordpad on txt file and it done the same thing it's doing to you.
Try saving on a txt file through a notepad.
Posted: 2004-06-14 14:51
M.O.A.B
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hmmm i'll have a go that way now then
Posted: 2004-06-14 15:43
M.O.A.B
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well this sucks.....it's still the same......im miffed.....sigh.....im going to go listen to some Iron Maiden and contemplate this dilemma
Posted: 2004-06-14 16:17
hardkoreUSMC
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I type all mine on Microsoft word, and when I want to save, I just change the type of file that I want to save it as from a regular .doc to a .txt file. I usually have two over every chapter. One document and one text file.
Skid Row is also good.
Posted: 2004-06-15 17:18